Subject: corrected draft of low energy neutrino paper
From: Bob Nolty (nolty@hep211.cithep.caltech.edu)
Date: Mon Dec 06 1999 - 07:32:18 EST
Hi all, and especially Maurizio,
I have finally finished revising the paper. In
http://www.cithep.caltech.edu/macro/protected/drafts/lownu/
(usual account name and password) you can find three files:
corrected.ps -- my version of the paper
deltas.ps -- shows exactly what I changed, and why
nolty.tex -- my version of the .tex file, contains both the above versions
I began with the version posted by Giuseppe a few days ago. I
apologize for my extreme tardiness; it took me about 5 times as long
as I expected to make the revisions. I thought my clever idea of
using a macro to put old text, new text and explanation all in the tex
file would save both me and Maurizio time, compared to a tedious 'on
page 3 line 7, change "the" to "these"' email. But in retrospect, it
may have been faster and easier to do it the stupid way.
My corrections fall in three categories --
"english" -- you should probably just take my word for it
"physics" -- some minor places where I found the old draft was inaccurate.
"clarity" -- just my opinion on how to make the paper more clear or
consistent. If you hate my ideas, I can probably be talked
out of them.
Maurizio -- if you decide to copy my edits to your file, rather than
using my .tex file as a base, be aware that I made punctuation
corrections in the bibliography that do not use my macros, and
reordered the bibliography in order of citations in the paper -- so
you should copy that out of my file to yours.
I think the paper is in very nice shape. I am amazed at your
abilities with the English language. Most of my edits are not really
English-related. They are mostly very minor edits, but I think they
make the paper more clear. The only fairly major editing I did was in
the section on oscillations, where I tried to improve clarity by
stating some things that had been implicit.
I will be happy to discuss the edit during the video meeting on
Tuesday.
Ci vediamo,
Bob
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